race writing

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In this writing it is about racing. I was racing outside with my class so this is going to be a recount.have you ever had a fun experience with your class before? Well my fun experience with my class is racing. me and my class went outside for racing. The first  group that was racing was a girls group and it was top 4 so who ever came top 4 is in the finals. My friend was in the second race but when he was racing he wasn't in top 4.but when me and my friends were waiting i was freezing on the hard concrete and when i was racing the grass was cold and wet it freezed my feet so i sprinted as fast as i can. Now for the final race it wasn't a sprint race it was a crawl race and i bet the people in the finals were shocked  they had to crawl on their legs and arms they looked like they were struggling a lot but Mr moran was in it and it didn't look like he was struggling. I was laughing because people were falling on their bottoms. But some people were cheating because they wanted to win the race.  my friend cheated and he won the race. And another person cheated but he didn't win but i bet the people that were  crawling i bet there hands and feet were freezing because the grass was very cold and wet  so i think that's why they were struggling a lot. Well i hope there hands are ok or feet great job to the people that were in the finals or the second race such as my friend.                                                 

captain underpants

 my new book for term is captain underpants.


hi everybody.the last time you saw us, we were headed to jail  for the rest of our lives. then something  even worse happened. check out this comic book get caught up on our story so far!. once upon a while ago there was two cool kids name ed George and Harold (George) we da bomb pops! (Harold) me too!. so they hipn-itized  him. (George) you will obey us! Mr (Krupp) OK!. they had rilly mean principle named Mr Krupp. blah blah blah and stuff! you are now captain underpants (Mr Krupp) groovy.

writing dictation

The amount of the moon that you can see from earth depends how much of it is lit up by the sun. this amount changes each day. The phases of the moon depends on its position in relation to the sun and earth. As the moon makes its way around the earth we see the bright  parts of the moon's surface at different angles. These are called  phases of the moon. It takes 29 days for the moon to orbit around the earth.

the frog

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There is a slimy green frog with big wide eyes gripping on the tree trying to catch his prey. It outstretched  its tongue just to  get the small cricket  that's on the green floating leaf the frog really wants that cricket so it's going to eat it. The frog stretched its tongue long then the frog jumped away.                             

the bmx boy and mr frosty

Jumping on a sunny day. The bmx boy did a bomb then he walked back up the rocky cliff. Then he had a chat with god.

The bmx boy was talking to Mr Frosty. The bmx boy  said’’ to Mr Frosty. “What is your   name?” Then he said’   “You can go with any name.” The bmx boy said “Any name could do”. So mr frosty said’’ how bout god. The bmx boy said “Are you god? you can't even do a bomb. God said. I can't do a bomb. I will show you a bomb. The bmx boy said’ wait can you even swim. So god said.’’ of course i can swim i invented swimming.

                                                                                           

God powerfully jumped. And did all these cool flips and spins then he quickly went in the water. After that he jumped out of the water. Then the boy got wet.  and then he said’  oh you really are god. After that god said.; I told you then the boy said.man your never to old to do a bomb after that. God said let's go. and get your choc top with all the sprinkles on it. so The bmx boy said'' yeah

Swimming Recount

Last week on monday me and my class went to the swimming pools first they took the  roll then we went to the .showers to get wet after they put us in our group first we were

Learnd  how to kick with our feet then they. made us go in to pears . my one was dean and we

Started .to use the kickboards. and we were kind of having a race to after that .we were doing a

Floating star fish after that  we were .swimming for the last time and doing free style  then when the year 3s and

4s came our instructor gave us a hi five.  that is when we got out  of .the pools then we went back to school but i hope were gonna

Do harder stuff to but i had fun.