Thursday, 16 November 2017


choose a narrative

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In the middle of nowhere here in this deserted places  these planes are just lying here all dirty and wet with grass all over it and it's all broken down. And i can see that there is other planes at the back but i can only see the plane on the side is it wing. I can see the plane at the back i can also see the plane the it's all dirty and it's wet with grass all over it too. We have to find a solution to get these planes atlast make these planes useful or get off our land. I think we should get some heavy machinery to carry a these planes out of our land. Hopefully all these dirty planes can get off our land. finally these planes are off our land now those planes were so dirty it is so wet and has dirty grass all over and i saw two that was dirty that why we had to get it off our land. Now our land is all cleaned up now.  there is no more planes on our land f.

Monday, 30 October 2017

race writing

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In this writing it is about racing. I was racing outside with my class so this is going to be a recount.have you ever had a fun experience with your class before? Well my fun experience with my class is racing. me and my class went outside for racing. The first  group that was racing was a girls group and it was top 4 so who ever came top 4 is in the finals. My friend was in the second race but when he was racing he wasn't in top 4.but when me and my friends were waiting i was freezing on the hard concrete and when i was racing the grass was cold and wet it freezed my feet so i sprinted as fast as i can. Now for the final race it wasn't a sprint race it was a crawl race and i bet the people in the finals were shocked  they had to crawl on their legs and arms they looked like they were struggling a lot but Mr moran was in it and it didn't look like he was struggling. I was laughing because people were falling on their bottoms. But some people were cheating because they wanted to win the race.  my friend cheated and he won the race. And another person cheated but he didn't win but i bet the people that were  crawling i bet there hands and feet were freezing because the grass was very cold and wet  so i think that's why they were struggling a lot. Well i hope there hands are ok or feet great job to the people that were in the finals or the second race such as my friend.                                                 

whats the time mr wolf

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Hi and today i am creating a writing and it is a about a game that is called what's the time Mr wolf?. In the morning me and the pav went to go play a game outside and it is called what's the time Mr wolf?.when we were starting our game we had to all the to the trees by the gate. I felt really nervous because i thought i wasn't going to win so i got to the back cause i was moving. So if you move you get sent to the back. But when i got sent to the back i got really close to my teacher oh and by the way my teacher Mr moran is the wolf. So i got closer and closer and i was so focused but i was also confident i was going to get him but i didn't someone else got and it was a girl.and it was so much fun because the hole pav was in and there was lots of people coming close. I was also really cold because it was in the morning cause in the morning it cold. After that we all went back to class.