my star dome adventure writing

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome. First the year 4s went into the stardome. we went to this black room to learn about planets and our solar system and  stars. then  we did a quizz. somebody had to hold a tablet and the other person had to go and find the answer  to the picture that was on the tablet. when we found the answer  to the picture we submit it but it wasn't working because  there was a  internet problem. then we just took the tablet back  and we were just looking around.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system.  We learned about stars and how long does it take  to get to planets and we learned how Venus is more hotter then Mercury and did you know the sun is a star and also the biggest star in our solar system the sun is so far away it is in space right now but it looks like the sun is so close it feels like the sun can burn you.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside.

On the park first we had to eat our lunch. What i had for lunch was a kebab and a sausage roll also a sandwich. After we ate our lunch we got to play on the park my favorite thing on the park was the slide and the spinning donut thing also the mini train i was having so much fun i was playing with my friends on the flying fox and we were playing kicks with the ball with our teacher Mr Moran. After that i went on the slide and me and my friends were going to the spinning donut thing then we were just pushing the people on the mini train.  

After all this, we headed back to Point England School.

We went into the bus to get back to school so we were getting in the bus but it was all packed so we went into the other bus and it wasn't packed so we went into the bus. When we were halfway back to school i noticed that everybody in the bus was quiet they were just talking. All i heard was talking because in the other bus it was really really loud all i heard what loudness and singing. But in the other bus it was a little quiet i just heard talking wasn't that loud.  there wasn't  loud singing to. When we were almost to school me and my friend was pretending to sleep. When i heard the bus stopped i opened i my eyes and i was back at school we sat down in the breeze and a teacher told us that it is almost lunch time so the people in the bus that i was in were waiting for the other people to come. After that everybody was here and they were all here it was lunch time so all the people went back to class to put our bags back but i didn't bring my bag  because  Mr Moran and miss moala told us to not bring all of our bags just bring two bags. So just put my bag away.